Sunday, June 6, 2010

Somewhere We Can be Alone.

Taken this down and going to post on LJ eventually.

Sorry, just want to keep it seperate. <3
Posted by ripley at 08:31
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6 comments:

  1. Krank06 June, 2010 15:06

    Aw! You're so cute...

    You definitely haven't lost that spark, Ripples!
    And yes.. I called you Ripples...

    This was so short and sweet, and so plain and simple. You aren't left wondering what led to that scene, or what became of the two after that scene. It's blatantly obvious. You just makes things so sweet! :)

    I iz happy.
    xo

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  2. ripley06 June, 2010 23:15

    Thanks heaps, K. First frerard or one-shot I have written in forever, so was kind of nervous about posting again and really appreciate the feedback!

    Was going for something sweet and gentle so am happy it came across as that. Also what you said about it being rounded. I'm glad you iz happy. :)

    xoxox

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  3. Michele07 June, 2010 02:06

    That was beautiful, brilliant. She lives! Very sexy and yet sweet and romantic (without being mushy or especially angsty). You're the master (mistess?) at that.

    Thanks loads!

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  4. ripley08 June, 2010 08:05

    Thanks, Michele! I'm very happy you think it was good :) being my paranoid self, I was worried I had lost whatever ability I had before after so long, it's kind of hard to be subjective.

    Also, am trying to write in third person, so that was a bit different too. Don't know if it makes it better or not, though.

    But thank you so, so much. You're always so kind.

    xoxox

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  5. Michele08 June, 2010 13:21

    You're welcome, darling. Hey, where will you be next Sunday, hmm? I'm taking off on the 14th. Oh and BTW I had cocnut M&Ms today...not too bad.

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  6. ripley08 June, 2010 22:35

    Hmmm, next Sunday I will be in Rome :) Well, leaving Rome in the morning and not sure where from there... Hope you have an awesome day on the 14th! Will be thinking of you <3 Still not sold on the coconut M&M's :)

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